Yesterday I went to picked up daisies. I saw a panda nudge the baby panda. Someone dropped the sandwich on the floor. I saw the car crashing when I'm going to countryside. I'm very nervous for the next PET test. I would be very surprising when I pass PET exam. My dad's car seriously got crashed last year. I dropped my favorite flavor of ice cream on the ground. That guy just disappear on the tree. I don't often dreaming of something.
Nice sentences Gai. Please have a look at these corrections. 1. "pick daisies". 4. "When I was going". 5. "nervous about". 6. "It would be very surprising" 9. "disappeared" 10. "dream"
1. Yesterday I went to shopping and I was hungry so I ate a sandwich. 2. I was nervous when I went to the dentist. 3. I don't dream that often when I sleep. 4. A lot of people like to nudge when they speak. 5. I was surprising when I got my new computer. 6. I always wish that i can disappear so no one can see me. 7. I walk on the ground everyday. 8.
Please use the "Reply" option to add the last three sentences. Here are some comments on the other sentences. 1. "go shopping" 4. "nudge when they speak" ? Better "nudge when they are waiting in a line" 5. "I was surprised"...or "It was surprising" 6. "I"
1.Sandwich=I ate a sandwich yesterday. 2.nervous=I was very nervous about the test. 3.countryside=I went to countryside in my last holiday. 4.ground=I plant some flowers in the ground. 5.seriously= 6.disappear=Yesterday my cat disappeared. 7.daisy=The daisy is a very good smelling flower. 8.dreaming=I was dreaming of a cat yesterday. 9.nudge=Yesterday I nudged a table. 10.surprising=It was very surprising when I opened the door.
Nice sentences Ara. Don't forget "seriously". Use "reply" to post. Here are some corrections. 3. "the countryside" 4. "planted" 7. "good smelling"..."nice smelling" is better.
1.I getting nervous when some one ask me a questions. 2.The ground was destroy with the earthquake last week. 3.I saw a lots of daisy last week it was beautiful. 4.When i was on the line someone was nudge me forward. 5.On Monday there is going to be a fish sandwich after school. 6.When i was on a countryside i went to see a very comment mountains. 7.The end of the week there will be a surprising competitions. 8.my friend have done something seriously worst then before. 9.There was a cat just disappear in front of me. 10.Last night I was dreaming about the thing we do yesterday.
Nice sentences Sake. Here are some comments. 1. "get nervous"...."question" 2. "destroyed" 3. "I saw a lot of daisies last week. They were beautiful." 4. "I was in the line someone nudged ..." 6. "I"..."in the countryside"..."comment" (?) 7. "At the end....competition" 8. "My friend has...worse" 9. "A cat just disappeared in front of me." 10. @the things we did"
Yesterday I went to picked up daisies.
ReplyDeleteI saw a panda nudge the baby panda.
Someone dropped the sandwich on the floor.
I saw the car crashing when I'm going to countryside.
I'm very nervous for the next PET test.
I would be very surprising when I pass PET exam.
My dad's car seriously got crashed last year.
I dropped my favorite flavor of ice cream on the ground.
That guy just disappear on the tree.
I don't often dreaming of something.
Nice sentences Gai. Please have a look at these corrections.
Delete1. "pick daisies".
4. "When I was going".
5. "nervous about".
6. "It would be very surprising"
9. "disappeared"
10. "dream"
1. Yesterday I went to shopping and I was hungry so I ate a sandwich.
ReplyDelete2. I was nervous when I went to the dentist.
3. I don't dream that often when I sleep.
4. A lot of people like to nudge when they speak.
5. I was surprising when I got my new computer.
6. I always wish that i can disappear so no one can see me.
7. I walk on the ground everyday.
8.
Please use the "Reply" option to add the last three sentences.
DeleteHere are some comments on the other sentences.
1. "go shopping"
4. "nudge when they speak" ? Better "nudge when they are waiting in a line"
5. "I was surprised"...or "It was surprising"
6. "I"
1.Sandwich=I ate a sandwich yesterday.
ReplyDelete2.nervous=I was very nervous about the test.
3.countryside=I went to countryside in my last holiday.
4.ground=I plant some flowers in the ground.
5.seriously=
6.disappear=Yesterday my cat disappeared.
7.daisy=The daisy is a very good smelling flower.
8.dreaming=I was dreaming of a cat yesterday.
9.nudge=Yesterday I nudged a table.
10.surprising=It was very surprising when I opened the door.
Nice sentences Ara. Don't forget "seriously". Use "reply" to post. Here are some corrections.
Delete3. "the countryside"
4. "planted"
7. "good smelling"..."nice smelling" is better.
1.I getting nervous when some one ask me a questions.
ReplyDelete2.The ground was destroy with the earthquake last week.
3.I saw a lots of daisy last week it was beautiful.
4.When i was on the line someone was nudge me forward.
5.On Monday there is going to be a fish sandwich after school.
6.When i was on a countryside i went to see a very comment mountains.
7.The end of the week there will be a surprising competitions.
8.my friend have done something seriously worst then before.
9.There was a cat just disappear in front of me.
10.Last night I was dreaming about the thing we do yesterday.
Sake 9c
Nice sentences Sake. Here are some comments.
Delete1. "get nervous"...."question"
2. "destroyed"
3. "I saw a lot of daisies last week. They were beautiful."
4. "I was in the line someone nudged ..."
6. "I"..."in the countryside"..."comment" (?)
7. "At the end....competition"
8. "My friend has...worse"
9. "A cat just disappeared in front of me."
10. @the things we did"